Project 01: Final review - Shane

Review, from part 1 to part 2

Thank you Fa for the pictures of yesterday's presentations! And congratulations to the ones who presented, there were some really interesting proposals and physical manifestations.




I would like to remind you once again that you should all attend all presentations. I already explained why - it is for your own good. 
The last projects we saw yesterday were particularly interesting and well developed, unfortunately only 2 or 3 students were present...




Before we move on to the next brief, post the whole of this project on the blog, along with a short text specifying the title and the idea/concept/position behind your design.


For those of you who have presented yesterday and realized you could improve on your drawings and/or models, feel free to present those improvements to me on Friday!. + post on the blog




Some suggestions ...
Golfe - your drawings especially your sections  could improve a lot (as you told me yourself!)


Ong - pursue and develop your hand drawings and paper models - your presentation was very poor


Fa - drawings! especially sections and façades


N - drawings & renderings! - research and explore the world of tensile architecture (you seem to have enjoyed the making of the roof..)


Best - drawings!


Pun - a sensory deprivation chamber might effectively be a good idea - visual explanation of your mirroring systems - drawings to be detailed and clarified


Enn - all the introduction to your project: scenario, inspiration etc.




Those are suggestions you can follow if you want to improve on your design abilities. It is not a question of getting a better mark, it is purely for yourself!




Looking forward to part 2 on Friday!
Please prepare your presentations well.