- DESIGN 3 / INDA International Program / Chulalongkorn faculty of architecure / BANGKOK -
The studio follows the general brief and schedule given to all second year students.
Good progression Shane, a lot to do still! -The context (apart from the trees, which are not actually faithful to the real ones on site) is strongly missing. You need to show the faculty (the facade on the elevation, the cut line in plan and in sections). We need to understand the visual connections and correspondences you are creating. Zoom out (keeping the right scale of course!). We need to see the project in a larger context.
-All drawings can be rendered: textures, materials, shadows, even colors, transparencies...
- Line-weight have to be used (fill the cutting lines with black or a pattern representing the material being cut through). In its actual state, you section A resembles your elevation: we do not understand the structure is being cut.
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look like have some mistake while export files to JPG.
Good progression Shane, a lot to do still!
-The context (apart from the trees, which are not actually faithful to the real ones on site) is strongly missing.
You need to show the faculty (the facade on the elevation, the cut line in plan and in sections). We need to understand the visual connections and correspondences you are creating.
Zoom out (keeping the right scale of course!). We need to see the project in a larger context.
-All drawings can be rendered: textures, materials, shadows, even colors, transparencies...
- Line-weight have to be used (fill the cutting lines with black or a pattern representing the material being cut through). In its actual state, you section A resembles your elevation: we do not understand the structure is being cut.
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