- DESIGN 3 / INDA International Program / Chulalongkorn faculty of architecure / BANGKOK -
The studio follows the general brief and schedule given to all second year students.
- The presentation board gives a very good overview of the project and of its design process. Read and correct mistakes on the written presentation of Seijima. You could also express your opinion, what you are learning from the study of her work.
- The axo is complete and the way you present details is successful. But why a green staircase?? (as there are no other colours...)
- The perspective section is just OK. USE LINE-WEIGHT! (and fill the cut elements (grey) for clarity's sake) You can add details, furniture, family members. I guess it would be better to choose a vanishing point/horizon at a level within the height of the house- maybe 2nd floor (effect closer to our actual perception).
- Again, it is difficult to read elevations upside down or at 90 degrees! It works well for magazines, but not for a static presentation.
- The perspective series is great! Finish it by integrating all your drawings in the story, and showing more of the house.
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- The presentation board gives a very good overview of the project and of its design process. Read and correct mistakes on the written presentation of Seijima. You could also express your opinion, what you are learning from the study of her work.
- The axo is complete and the way you present details is successful. But why a green staircase?? (as there are no other colours...)
- The perspective section is just OK. USE LINE-WEIGHT! (and fill the cut elements (grey) for clarity's sake)
You can add details, furniture, family members. I guess it would be better to choose a vanishing point/horizon at a level within the height of the house- maybe 2nd floor (effect closer to our actual perception).
- Again, it is difficult to read elevations upside down or at 90 degrees! It works well for magazines, but not for a static presentation.
- The perspective series is great! Finish it by integrating all your drawings in the story, and showing more of the house.
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